It has already been more than two month since I entered MMU. Now, I think that it is good for me to talk about my university life. In university, I have learn to accept challenges, manage my time, meet many new friends and lectures.
In university , as a student we are exposed to an ocean of challenges. Each individual has learned to accept these challenges, such as, team work, develop strategies and plans, and motivate myself to achieve success. These challenges teaches me a very important lessons in my life. As a student, I must learn to become a self motivator, independent, strong and take up responsibilities.
Personally, I have learnt to manage my university life which I believe has made me a better person. For example, when I was given a project to complete within a stated deadline. I had to plan out my time, so that I could complete my project on time for submission. Through this, I learnt the importance of time management. I also learnt to believe that a goal is easier to achieve if well planned and disciplined.
University life also gives me a chance to meet new people from other states and countries. It makes me develop a good communication skill and get me to know people of different backgrounds , including cultural and academic backgrounds. It helps me to open my mind to various thoughts, views and opinions. Moreover, my university life also give me a lot of freedom. I am in a position where I have a lots of choices and important decisions to make. In another word, I have freedom to make a decision.
I have never regretted coming to study in MMU. This is my two month’s life in this prestigious university. I love MMU.
Dearest Richard,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us :) It is good to see that your university experience has helped you progress towards maturity and independence :)
The essay is very structured with a clear thesis statement and the topic sentences are also clear, except the first main idea which could be even more precise if you had written, University life has made me rise to the challenge, for example, instead of writing a general statement that all students face challenges. Nonetheless, the supporting details are also good.
Continue writing and improving ya :) Looking forward to your next essay :)
Have a great day! :)
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Jasline